The Silence Along My Spine


It is a dream I do not remember
But remember all the same
Like those faces I desire
Without knowing their name
As if in the grand scheme of things
Wherein a million stories unfold
I am just a chapter
Of a young man who grew old

These oceans which are open
These skies which are blind
These forests which aren’t silent
These mountains sans a mind
Are mine to behold and break
To bind and to find
For the similes to be kept never similar
And metaphors ever one of a kind

You can call my claims childish
Or let my words make you weep
When you see the vacuum in my voice
Hover upon my lower lip
Where the broken wind balances
Those desires and despair
And life in its likeliest form
Is heartbeat at the end of a hair

If only I could myself see and show
What I have lost in my pursuit to know
The allegories of living
Without wanting to grow
Alas, I have my own
Reason to bear the blame:
For to the man who shall leave no footprints
The dust is all the same

Comments

11 responses to “The Silence Along My Spine”

  1. Mitchel David Ring Avatar

    Beautiful!

    “I am just a chapter
    Of a young man who grew old”

    those lines made me stop and think

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you, Mitchel… Glad you could connect to the poemπŸ™πŸ»

  2. Aaeedah Avatar

    It skipped my mind to comment on this exquisite piece.
    This is one of your many poems that, I firmly believe, belongs to a English Literature textbook. It holds so much in just a few stanzas, and leaves the reader in a euphoric state by the end of it (if that makes sense). Aspiring writers should study it for its message and style, seriously. There’s a dearth of good literature in these times.

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you very much, Pragya, for your ever encouraging presence and compliments. It means a lot to have as good a writer as you acknowledge my work and hold it to such high esteem. Always indebted. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ» Although I must add that they truly pale when in comparison with your work.

  3. Aaeedah Avatar

    Also, the title is itself praise-worthy, and apt.

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Glad you liked itπŸ˜„

      1. Aaeedah Avatar

        Also, the alliteration work in third stanza is of a very high standard.

        1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

          You are far too gracious… Thank You πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    I really like your poem! This line in particular:
    I am just a chapter
    Of a young man who grew old

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you very much, sir. Glad you liked the poem πŸ™πŸ»πŸ˜Š

      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are very welcome!

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