I can see what you are getting at. I see good poems as successfully outlining the shape of something true but inexpressible, giving the reader sufficient clues to intuit the rest.
I look practiced poems as successfully outlining the condition of something true(p) but inexpressible, giving the lecturer sufficient clues to intuit the residue.
I guess i disagree with this one. in Mistletoe Blues The viewer is seeing all life’s imperfections and then some…at the same time I agree …in that all the imperfections are held together by the song that entwines through them. If that wasn’t there they would just be strange descriptions…of probably a bad date.
Absolutely true. But what I am hinting at is the fact that nowadays people use too complicated words and prose to say something almost trivial….Or nothing at all…
I can see what you are getting at. I see good poems as successfully outlining the shape of something true but inexpressible, giving the reader sufficient clues to intuit the rest.
Exactly!
Ohhh… excellent… right between the shards of glass your speaking honesty …succinctly:)
😊 I am glad that you liked it! Thank you.
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I look practiced poems as successfully outlining the condition of something true(p) but inexpressible, giving the lecturer sufficient clues to intuit the residue.
I guess i disagree with this one. in Mistletoe Blues The viewer is seeing all life’s imperfections and then some…at the same time I agree …in that all the imperfections are held together by the song that entwines through them. If that wasn’t there they would just be strange descriptions…of probably a bad date.
Absolutely true. But what I am hinting at is the fact that nowadays people use too complicated words and prose to say something almost trivial….Or nothing at all…
It’s true…I wonder what you’ll think of Santa Baby..#112 Either way…Merry Christmas!
Same to you 😊