Most well written poems,
Don’t mean anything,
They are but broken words,
Stitched together,
To mirror perfection.
Cluster.
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10 responses to “Cluster.”
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I can see what you are getting at. I see good poems as successfully outlining the shape of something true but inexpressible, giving the reader sufficient clues to intuit the rest.
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Exactly!
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Ohhh… excellent… right between the shards of glass your speaking honesty …succinctly:)
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😊 I am glad that you liked it! Thank you.
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I look practiced poems as successfully outlining the condition of something true(p) but inexpressible, giving the lecturer sufficient clues to intuit the residue.
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I guess i disagree with this one. in Mistletoe Blues The viewer is seeing all life’s imperfections and then some…at the same time I agree …in that all the imperfections are held together by the song that entwines through them. If that wasn’t there they would just be strange descriptions…of probably a bad date.
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Absolutely true. But what I am hinting at is the fact that nowadays people use too complicated words and prose to say something almost trivial….Or nothing at all…
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It’s true…I wonder what you’ll think of Santa Baby..#112 Either way…Merry Christmas!
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Same to you 😊
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