Oeuvre

I watched her dirty hands
Broken fingernails
Walk across the canvas
Making music

The choir of desolate buildings
Painted with middle-age;
( That grey
Like mould upon the horizon)
Was left unheard
In the empty rooms
While the people;
(Polka dots
As daisies at the door)
Stood silent
Waiting, in the hallways
For the voices to rise
From beyond the bricks.

If only I could paint
And knew what she meant
By that colourless void
I would not have left
To look around
In search of a canvas
With a different sound

Comments

9 responses to “Oeuvre”

  1. blindzanygirl Avatar
    blindzanygirl

    Such an evocative poem. Beautiful

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you very much for your kind words. I am glad you liked it 😊

  2. d.a.simpsonwriter Avatar

    A poignantly evoked whimsical poem. Well done

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you very much 😊

      1. d.a.simpsonwriter Avatar

        You’re welcome 😊

  3. Aa'eedah Avatar

    The imagination in this poem is… mind-blowing and inspiring, and that of a true artist!
    I hope I’m not messing up your notifications. 😩

    Thank you.

    1. TheHumanAnvil Avatar

      Thank you very much 😊
      And don’t worry about the notifications… Always eager to know your opinion ✌️✌️

      1. Aa'eedah Avatar

        You’re always welcome. 😊
        And thank you!

  4. Shanyu Avatar

    Stunning. Love the simplicity yet an alluring depth. Beautiful.

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