When the sunflowers gather
Around my grave
Let the roots run deep
If only to save
Those eyes of mine; far from free,
Closed forever
Yet willing to see.
Roots
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9 responses to “Roots”
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WOW. This is fantastic and poignant writing. Amazing piece here, it’s well-written.
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Thank you very much 😊 I am glad you liked it
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Even your short poems* are like well-articulated essays/articles to me. They have a great depth and many stimulating points, and must be read over and over again to grasp the full meaning.
*Pardon me for my limited knowledge of poetry forms.
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‘…Closed forever
Yet willing to see”: superbly evoked-
Thank you very much for the compliment 😊😊
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You’re welcome
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So very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful!!💕💕
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